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NaNoRetro 1: What Was Most Fun

During the rush to write 50,000 words for National Novel Writing Month, it is very easy for the process to turn into a real space-filling slog.

I’m happy to report that, for me, NaNoWriMo 2009 never felt sloggish. Some times were more amusing to me than others, though.

The Beginning

The chapters that introduced the major characters gave me a lot of surprises. When I started writing, I only had a few major characters in mind: Zazal the Lotorian, Vard Bokren the pirate, and Aldur Bokren – disgraced and broken father of the pirate.

Zazal started out in my mind as a relatively hapless innocent, but he quickly evolved into a creature with a lot of knowledge (especially about alien languages) and some craftiness to go along with his conscience. This character was a new creation, not based on anything I’d introduced to players on the grid. That made him even more interesting.

People on OtherSpace had met Vard Bokren before. In his in-game iteration, he’s a fairly standard, straightforward villain with a funky electrified prop on his arm. So, sticking him in this story allowed me the chance to provide readers with a “prequel” version of the pirate. He’s not as dark, brutal, or anvilicious as this story begins. In fact, as the story progresses and he starts to trust Zazal more, Vard actually gains a more Han Solo-ish quality – the smart-alecky rogue.

The Kamir Chapters

I really had a great deal of fun fleshing out the back story of the ancient race known as the Kamir and their creations, the Il’ri Kamm Hive Mind. For the first time since OtherSpace opened in 1998, I took some time and provided the foundational story for them. This only really became possible in this context because of the framework of writing about the origins of the civilizations on Kamsho.

For people who play Opodians, Llivori, Gankri, and Tupai, these chapters offer good information about where they came from. For everyone else, it puts into perspective the creation of the Hive Mind and the eventual fall of the Kamir.

Arrival on Comorro

As everyone finally came together aboard Comorro Station, it felt like a natural finishing point for the opening, stage-setting material of the broader work.

In particular, I enjoyed the chance to parallel the conversation between Vard and Zazal with that of Vard and his friend Yurok much earlier in the book. In the earlier conversation, Vard sits silently while Yurok nervously spills his guts about betraying his commander. In this later chapter, Zazal refuses to talk while Vard keeps blurting in frustration.


In all honesty, none of the writing in this felt like a chore. I never fell so far behind that the climb felt impossible and I paced the final push for when everything in the story was coming to a head.

I’m looking forward to where the story goes next!

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